Our Pitch!

 Today me and my group had to decide what our pitch was going to be. We wanted a pitch that perfectly describes what our film would be about, yet would still leave our target audience on edge as to what plot twists will occur in our film

Our first pitch is "Bullied kid, the main character, makes a friend in the park. Their new friend is kind and funny. Everything is perfect until our main character makes a shocking discovery."

This pitch lays out the base of the film well, but the hook at the end is what drives that audience to go forth and watch. Our group likes this pitch the least because it is choppy and wordy. We feel that we can come up with a pitch that can execute the same task with a more concise leading tone.

Our second pitch was "An innocent day out with friends leads to a mystery only they can solve."

This pitch does the job of the first once although it is concise and straight to the point. My group likes this theme because it creates a setting that accurately describes the film, innocent, daylight etc... Also, this theme captures the mystery aspect of the film well and introduces key anomalies like only "they" can solve the mystery, which adds potential mystery and arises questions.

Our last pitch was "(Main character) has been average their whole life... until one day, they discover something about themself no-one else should know. "

This pitch, although also a bit long, is the most descriptive pitch that our group has. It is one that paints the most clear image while still leaving the audience to question, and look for answers. Looking back on the character to foreshadow a plot is also crucial in a pitch and this is done very well here.

Overall we chose pitch three. "(Main character) has been average their whole life... until one day, they discover something about themself no-one else should know." Perfectly leads the audience on while giving just enough information to hint at a story. We are happy with this theme!!