Our Pitch!
Today me and my group had to decide what our pitch was going to be. We wanted a pitch that perfectly describes what our film would be about, yet would still leave our target audience on edge as to what plot twists will occur in our film Our first pitch is "Bullied kid, the main character, makes a friend in the park. Their new friend is kind and funny. Everything is perfect until our main character makes a shocking discovery." This pitch lays out the base of the film well, but the hook at the end is what drives that audience to go forth and watch. Our group likes this pitch the least because it is choppy and wordy. We feel that we can come up with a pitch that can execute the same task with a more concise leading tone. Our second pitch was "An innocent day out with friends leads to a mystery only they can solve." This pitch does the job of the first once although it is concise and straight to the point. My group likes this theme because it creates a setting that acc...